I'm...intrigued. Charley reminds me of Jaz Parks though so far Jaz is winning out; it is close though.
The narrator is okay, at times even good, but I'm thinking the audio quality is wonky because at times she almost sounds like the computer created voice. Again, I think it's the quality. Her choice of voices for each character is pretty spot on though and she melds the descriptions and speech well.
But my word, the tangents! Did I need to know about Danger and Will Robinson?